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100 WC Week 36

100 WC week 36
After a bit of a break we are going to have a go at the 100WC again.
Before you start, you will have to make some decisions about what is real size and that will then influence your story!
Make sure you really think imaginatively and use entertaining word choices and check your punctuation carefully.

Can you include simple, compound and complex sentences?
Speech between characters?
Adverbs and adverbials?

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5 responses to “100 WC Week 36

  1. ” whats that” asked the builder there was no response sadly all homes had been wreckred. it was the shakyness of the egg that had caused all the damage that has seemed to apear. he did not know what dod do so he decided to abandon his home and move to holly wood while he was gone a family came. They saw the cream egg and they said we will have that for dinner tonight. when it came to dinner time there was no cream egg! They noticed there kids were very fat. Afterall it was there kids who eaten it…

  2. Once upon a time there lived a boy called Bill he had brown hair and brown eyes. One day something peculiar happened in the night suddenly he heard the ground go BUMP!. He went back to sleep because he thought it was just a dream.

    The next day Bill went outside because he heard drilling noises he thought “what is that?” It was a huge cream egg that had cracked open! “That must have been the bump in the night” said Bill.

    The egg was oozing lots of tasty chocolate so Bill grabbed his spoon and dived in “YUM!” He shouted.

    By Charlie b

  3. One day a man called Ben in New York City had a meteor storm going on but after all the coincidence it actually stopped after 30 minutes “phew” my house was almost blew up by a meteor five seconds later BOOM a giant meteor had crashed into his house but this was no ordinary meteor…

    The next day after he had slept in the hotel he went up to look at the meteor ” wow a giant cream egg it can’t be” . At the park,he played and ran and later he tucked into the egg how yummy it’s nice.

    End.

  4. “Whats that?” asked the builder no response, sadly all homes had been wrecked! The shakiness of the egg that had caused all the damage that has seemed to appear. He did not know what do so he decided to abandon his home and move to Hollywood nevertheless while he was gone a family came. They saw the cream egg and they said “we will have that for dinner tonight.” When it came to dinner time there was no egg! Quickly They noticed there kids were fat. After all it was there kids who eaten all of it in the tent.

  5. Wow that looks like a big spill!